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Broly Movie 10 Remake: Super Warriors Never Die!; Remake of Broly movie 10
Topic Started: Sep 7 2010, 03:51 AM (3,908 Views)
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Hm, interesting indeed. I'm liking the backstory.
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Sep 11 2010, 08:38 PM
Haha, indeed. I've worked on it a bit further, but, I'm unsure how to proceed between the next part and the ending (which I think I've already decided upon partly) so, I'm going to take some time to think about it.
Good. Look take your time lol , Being hasty isn´t alway´s good i speak from experience. xD.
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Part IV: Finish

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"Come, Broly. We are attacking one of Freeza's stations, it's nearby! Let's get revenge for what he did to the Saiyan race!" Paragus said to Broly, sitting in a stone throne in the broken castle of their planet.

"..." Broly sat quietly, looking at the floor. Paragus, now blinded in one eye from Broly punching it out, clapped his hand on Broly's shoulder. "I forgive you, son. It's alright, you were angry." Paragus said, slightly annoyed at Broly's disposition.

"No." Broly said as he looked at Paragus. "I've been thinking. If power is everything... then why do the weak even exist?"

Paragus sighed and sat down in the throne adjacent to Broly's. The warm sunlight bathed into the dark throne room, illuminating it as the dust particles swirled around in the air. The smell of fresh wildlife rejuvenating in the glow flowed into the room.

"The weak only exist out of absence of power. Everything has power. "Weak" is just a relative term to describe those with less of... Dark is the absence of light and light is the absence of dark. Dark and light are the same thing, but, they only exist when the other doesn't. Just like with weakness and power." Paragus said, looking at Broly.

Broly looked at Paragus after being quiet for a moment. "Without me, you are weak." Broly said with a disdainful look on his face.

Paragus was taken completely off guard and began shaking slightly at this. "B-Broly... I..."

"Save it. I begin to wonder why I'm here." Broly said. "You say that it is those with powers' job to destroy the weakness in the world, if only for a more pure existence... but, perhaps the weak are truly the powerful ones. They seem powerful, even though they aren't. They feel powerful, even though they shouldn't. They are the most brave beings in existence, even though they should cower. Why...?"

Paragus sat up, now standing in the darkness. "Fine, I'll do it myself."
Broly looked at Paragus. "You will be killed." Paragus growled and left the palace. "If he doesn't want to obey... I'll make him!"

"Light and dark... one is the absence of another. Weak and strong... one is the result of the other...?"
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Broly's eyes cracked opened slightly as he inhaled a breath of stale air. "They did this to me... I thought I was the powerful one. Trying to do justice in this mundane world... yet, I am the one beaten...?!"

Gohan, Vegeta, Trunks, Goten and Piccolo all landed next to the crater.
"Stay put. Broly was merely toying with you as a Super Saiyan. You will be fodder if you try to fight him at his full potential." Piccolo said, stopping the kids from following as Gohan and Vegeta leaped down into the crater. "We don't need to take unnecessary risks." Piccolo jumped down as well.

"B-But!" Goten said, holding onto the bag of Dragonballs.

"Just wait for 'em, Goten. They can do all the hard stuff!" Trunks said, chuckling.

The three began to fly down into the crater.

"I don't sense anything, Vegeta! I can't even see anything down here!" Gohan yelled to Vegeta as they descended downwards.

"No... NO! I will not... NOT AGAIN...!" Broly roared as huge beams of light shot out from under the rocks he was buried under and they exploded up through the crater.

"What the hell!?" Vegeta said, guarding his face as thousands of pieces of sharp rock shot upwards through the crater, pelting Gohan, Vegeta and Piccolo.

Broly flew upwards through the crater and hovered slightly below them.
"RAAAAAAAAH!" Broly screamed as he began to transform again. The light illuminated the crater, shocking Vegeta and Gohan as Piccolo shielded his eyes. The energy exploded outwards, leveling the rest of the countryside. The mountains nearby collapsed onto the village, destroying it completely.

The burst of energy shot all five of them flying backwards in separate directions, the bag of Dragonballs flying and catching in a tree as Goten slammed into a mountainside. Trunks flew through the air and simply crashed into the ground onto his back. Piccolo shot through the side of the crater and was pushed far underground.

Vegeta and Gohan were launched through the side of the forest left untouched by Broly's wrath and came to a stop after being bashed through many trees.

Broly, in his Legendary Super Saiyan form, roared and powered up to full power.

"Wh-what?! He... he wasn't even at full power before!?" Vegeta said.
Gohan got up. "This may be the end of the Earth..." Gohan turned Super Saiyan 2 promptly and powered up to full power. Vegeta grinded his teeth and did as well. "Dammit!"

Piccolo blasted his way out of his underground cavern and flew out, floating above the huge caved in valley and cliff side. He landed on a distant piece of flat land and powered up.

Trunks and Goten both stood up and turned Super Saiyan as they flew into the air. Gohan and Vegeta flew over the battlefield as well, as Broly was floating mid-air over the center of the crater; Goten and Trunks to his left and Gohan/Vegeta to his right. Piccolo flew up in front of Broly.

"Why do you even TRY!?" Broly yelled as Goten and Trunks flew at him. He grabbed Goten and Trunks and violently bashed their heads together. Piccolo and Vegeta flew at him next. Broly threw Goten and Trunks down into the crater.

Broly chopped downwards at Piccolo's shoulder and took his arm off. Broly then kneed him in the stomach, elbowed Vegeta in the face and blasted Piccolo down into a patch of trees, which exploded outwards upon impact. Gohan charged with Vegeta. Gohan violently began punching and kicking Broly's back, while Vegeta used a series of punches to Broly's chest, which did nothing.

Broly punched Vegeta in the side of the head with his right hand then his left. He then grabbed him by his hair and used him as a shield as Gohan shot a barrage of blasts at Broly. Gohan quickly stopped and charged at him, yelling. Broly dropped Vegeta and kicked him down into the crater.
Broly grabbed Gohan by his shoulders and pulled them back, suspending him mid air and kicking him repeatedly in the back, while nearly breaking his arms.

"GAHH!" Gohan yelled, trying to maneuver out of the position with no avail. Broly laughed as he drove his legs into Gohan's back, pushing his energy into his feet as he yanked on his arms violently. "Augh..." Gohan screamed in agony as he lost consciousness and reverted to base form.
"Pathetic..." Broly said as he held Gohan up by one arm in the air and put his hand to his stomach, shooting a chi ball and launching him down to the ground below, the chi ball exploding.

Broly smirked and flew away from the destroyed crater, to the other side of the mountain and into a sparsely grassy, more cliff-filled area. The cold wind swept across the landscape, chilling even Broly. He landed in the center of the savannah-like area and stood still, feet together and arms crossed.

"Let's see who crawls out of the woodwork first." Broly thought as he saw a dot raise from the sky, an aura appeared around it and it flew down towards Broly.

"Trunks... Heh." Broly thought as Trunks landed in Super Saiyan, bleeding from the forehead.

"Broly... you're such a jerk." Trunks said.

"I've heard worse." Broly said as he charged at Trunks, slamming his elbow into his face. Trunks yelled in pain and fell to the ground. Broly lifted him up with his foot, balancing Trunks' back on the tip of his boot. Broly chuckled and launched him into the air with his foot and then, using his other leg, kicked him in the stomach as he came back down.

Trunks briefly opened his eyes, the world swirling around as his vision faded slightly. He landed on his knees, clutching his stomach.

"Gah..." Trunks said shaking as he looked up at Broly towering over him, except this time, instead of smiling, he looked slightly sad and angry. Goten and Vegeta suddenly landed behind Trunks.

"Why are you weak...?" Broly asked in a low voice, which only Trunks heard.

"I'm... not weak. You're just t-too s-strong...!" Trunks said as he looked up at Broly and grinded his teeth. Broly seemed shocked for a moment and taken aback. The wind swept by again as he tightened his fist. He roared angrily under his breath, trampling over Trunks and clotheslining Goten and Vegeta. Trunks sighed and went back to base form, still conscious, but, worn out.

Goten hit the ground harshly, however, Vegeta rebounded, catching himself with one arm and flipping backwards.

"Broly, quit picking on children, or are you really that pathetic?" Vegeta said smirking, turning Super Saiyan 2 once more as the lightning crackled around him.

Goten stood up and turned Super Saiyan and Piccolo landed behind Broly as well.

"Feh... no matter how many of you there are, you simply cannot beat me! I am the Legendary WARRIOR!" Broly yelled as he charged at Vegeta and Goten. Goten flew over Broly and kicked him in the back, which had no effect. Broly reached back and threw Goten at Vegeta, who dodged. Broly swung at Vegeta, but, Vegeta dodged and jumped off of Broly's arm and kicked him in the back of the neck.

Piccolo ran up from behind and chopped him in the back and swung around, kicking him in the left knee. None of this had any effect. Goten charged a Kamehameha and blasted Broly from the side, as Vegeta and Piccolo leaped back in time. Vegeta roared and launched a barrage of ki blasts into the smoke and Piccolo shot a series of chi balls around Broly like he did with Android 17.

As soon as Vegeta finished his barrage, Piccolo swiped his arm as they slammed into the smoke viciously. The wind kicked up as the smoke and dust from the attack was swept up and blown outwards. Piccolo panted lightly as Vegeta stood in a battle stance.

Suddenly, Broly roared and flew out of the smoke, entwining his hands and slamming them downwards into Piccolo's neck as he bashed into the ground face first, hacking up blood. Broly kicked him across the ground and shot a ray of energy at him.

Vegeta flew at him and shot a ray of energy at him with his other hand. Vegeta disappeared and re-appeared in front of Broly and punched him in the stomach, which only made him recoil back a bit.

"You're quick on your feet, at least." Broly said, smirking.

"You're not as stupid as you look, at least." Vegeta said, smirking as well. He swung at Broly, who dodged by moving slightly to the left and lifting up his arm. Broly clamped his arm down around Vegeta's elbow and lifted him up, slamming his head back against Vegeta's. Vegeta roared, blood trickling down his forehead as he swung his leg against Broly's lower back. Vegeta put his free hand in between Broly's shoulder blades and shot a massive ball of energy.

Broly groaned and fell forward a bit, turning around as Vegeta slid across the ground on one leg and fell back. Goten watched in shock.
"W-We can't beat him..." Goten thought to himself, shaking. Broly laughed. Piccolo stood up.

"D-Damn..." Piccolo said, coughing. Broly roared once again as he charged towards Vegeta with an energy shield around him. He smashed into Vegeta as the energy shield exploded, sending Vegeta flying several yards across the savannah.

Piccolo roared and punched Broly in the face with no effect.
"Hmm... you are stronger than before. Though, I still have no idea who you are." Broly said as he uppercutted Piccolo back. Piccolo landed on his feet and stumbled forward a bit.

"Goten! Leave!" Piccolo said as he charged at Broly.

Goten shuddered and began to fly away. Broly raised his arm up and aimed at Goten, but, Trunks flew up in the way and put his arms out.
"Oh no you don't!" Trunks yelled, panting heavily. Broly smirked and shot a green chi ball into Trunks' stomach, which blasted him towards Goten.

"T-Trunks!" Goten yelled as he dodged the blast. Trunks hit the ground as the blast exploded, unconscious again.
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Goten flew through the air as he landed in base form around the base of the crater in the destroyed valley over. He grabbed the bag of Dragonballs and poured them out on the ground.

"Shenron, arise!" Goten said, praying comically to the Dragonballs. However, nothing happened. "W-What...?! Wait... there's only six here! Th-the four star!"

Goten began to panic and look around for the last Dragonball.
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Piccolo fell to his knees, panting and blood dripping. His hands grasped a handful of rock and grassy dirt as he gasped for air.

"He's... immortal. If only Goku was here... Ugh. Where's Gohan...!?" Piccolo thought as he looked up at Broly.

Broly picked him up by the scruff of his torn up shirt and lifted him in the air.

"How did Kakarrot die...?" Broly asked. Vegeta leaned up, knelt down, right arm laying across his knee and the other on the ground, he was panting heavily.

"Goku died defending this planet from destruction seven years ago! We won't let that be in vain!" Piccolo said, roaring and kicking Broly in the chest and leaping back next to Vegeta.

"We're going to die." Piccolo said to Vegeta, bluntly.

Vegeta spit out blood onto the ground and stepped on it. "I have an idea."
Piccolo perked up a bit and looked at Vegeta as Broly chuckled in a battle stance.

"We'll get Kakarrot to make the genki dama! It works every time!" Vegeta said sarcastically. "Oh, wait!"

Vegeta roared and powered up, charging at Broly. Broly shot several chi disks at Vegeta as he ran at him. Vegeta jumped and dodged over a few, shooting a chi ball at Broly's face, which did nothing. Vegeta continued running at Broly, who charged another chi ball in his hand and ran at Vegeta, slamming it up against his stomach and blasting him back against Piccolo.
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Goten jumped into the destroyed village and looked under slabs of rock for the last Dragonball, which he figured must be in the village somewhere.
"I gotta find it... we need Shenron!" Goten said as he looked around under the rock.

"Is... is this what you're looking for?" The village elder said holding up the four star Dragonball, he was slightly bloodied and walking up behind Goten.
"E-Elder!" Goten said. "Y-Yes!"

"I'm the only one who survived... even my granddaughter died... beat that monster!" The Elder said, handing Goten the Dragonball.
"Where are you going to go?" Goten said, looking at the Dragonball and back at him.

"I do not know..." The elder said, walking off in the distance.
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Piccolo shook as he stood up, but, coughed and fell onto his side. Vegeta, heavily wounded with loud, grungy panting, flew down at Broly. Broly leaped out of the way as Vegeta pushed off the ground towards Broly.

Vegeta put both of his hands out and shot a large chi ball at Broly, who parried it back at him. Vegeta narrowly dodged. Broly grabbed Vegeta by his face and threw him down and jumped on him, laughing.
Vegeta yelled in pain as Broly landed on him and kicked him across the ground.
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Goten jumped over to the bag of Dragonballs and landed in a clearing of the trees nearby as the shrill, fiercely cold wind roared by once more. Goten poured out the Dragonballs as they all bumped each other and began to glow. The sky became dark.

Broly lifted Vegeta in the air, who cracked his eyes open and looked at Broly.

"Not so noble are you now, Vegeta? Tell me... what is it like to constantly not be good enough?" Broly said as he held Vegeta in the air. Broly looked up for a moment, however, noticing the change in the sky.
"HYAAH!" Vegeta yelled, powering up and kicking in the face and pushing away from him. Broly grunted in pain and Vegeta and the incapacitated Piccolo looked up: The Eternal Dragon.

Broly looked up as well. "What is... that?!"

Goten looked up in amazement at the Eternal Dragon.

"Reflect upon your desires, I shall grant two wishes and any two wishes." Shenron said.

Broly looked in shock and blasted towards the Dragon out of curiosity. He landed below it, near Goten.

"What is this?!" Broly yelled, pointing at the Dragon. "Tell me!"

"N-No! He can't know!" Goten thought, turning Super Saiyan and charging at Broly. Broly was caught off guard, however, elbowed Goten into his knee and kicked him into the ground then harshly stepped on his back.
"Talk!" Broly said.

The Dragon remained quiet, watching the chaos going on below.

Goten began bleeding and crying. "No no no no no!"

"RRRAH!" Broly yelled as he kicked Goten across the ground fiercely, who fell out of Super Saiyan.

"I wish dad was here! He'd save us!" Goten yelled, without realizing what he said.

"Son Goku has been restored to life once before. This wish cannot be granted." The Eternal Dragon said.

"What?! Son Goku? Kakarrot!?" Broly said looking at the Dragon.
Piccolo landed next to Broly, barely able to stand.

"P-Please! Use both wishes if you must, let him come back, even for just a short while, to help us beat Broly!" Piccolo beckoned the Dragon.
The Dragon was quiet for a moment. "As you wish."

"What?!" Broly yelled in confusion as he looked at Piccolo. He tripped Piccolo and stepped on his stomach.

"What's going on here!? ANSWER ME!" Broly yelled to Piccolo, who was shaking.

Suddenly, the sky returned to normal and the Dragonballs blasted into the air, separating in different directions. Broly watched them do so and looked back down at Piccolo.

"I'll kill you!" Broly said, grabbing Piccolo's face.

"No you won't!" A voice called out as Broly turned around. It was Goku.
Goku landed on the ground, halo above his head.

"D-Dad...?! Is it really you...?" Goten said, laying on the ground.
"Yes, son. I'll take care of Broly." Goku said, turning Super Saiyan 2.
"G-Goku!" Piccolo said. "I can sense his energy... he's actually here!" Piccolo thought to himself. Vegeta floated overhead. "Kakarrot?!"

"You... Kakarrot... Now, you will get to die by my hands!" Broly said as Goku charged at him.

Vegeta flew down and swung at Broly, who dodged. Goku kicked Broly in the side, but, Broly grabbed his leg and threw him over his head and forward. Vegeta punched Broly in the back and frontflipped over him, pushing off the ground in front of Broly and punched him violently in the stomach with no effect. Broly laughed as he spin kicked Vegeta across the ground and grabbed Goku by his face as he stood up. Broly laughed as he pile drived Goku's face into the ground.

"What's wrong, Kakarrot?! Tasting the very dirt you're made out of?" Broly said, smirking. Broly began running fast, dragging Goku's face across the ground; after running for several yards, he stopped and hurled Goku into the air, who tried to regain his balance; but, Broly shot several rays of energy at Goku mid air, blasting him out of the sky. Goku hit the ground with a large thud.

Goku stood up slowly, face bloody. "Ugh! Broly! You're a lot stronger this time! I don't know if I can beat you! Heh heh." Goku said, rubbing the back of his head.

Vegeta lifted himself up with one arm. "You've... got to be kidding me."

Vegeta said, falling into base form and his arm giving out.

Broly flew into the air as Goku flew up at him. Goku swung and hit Broly in the face, which did nothing. Broly grabbed his leg and began swirling around rapidly in the air. He then threw him into the savannah nearby.

Goku slid and crashed up against a cliff, which cracked and broke upon him. Broly landed next to the collapsed cliff. Goku stood up panting.
"That's the spirit!" Broly said, full-power punching Goku in the stomach, who coughed up blood and stopped breathing, the air knocked out of him. Goku fell down on the ground.

Broly looked down at him as he began to get up. Broly angrily grunted and slammed his elbow down into Goku's face. Goku flipped over and looked at Broly. Broly kicked him into the air and punched him in the chest, sending him flying into another cliff side.

Broly panted lightly as he began collecting chi in his hand. "You all lasted awhile, I'll admit, I underestimated your strength. For the first time, you made me feel weak. Powerless. The one thing I've ever had, you've tried taking from me, and, for that, you WILL DIE!" Broly said, landing upon a very steep cliff-like plateau and forming a chi ball in his hand.

A large green aura concentrated itself as it focused into the palm of his hand.Goku stood up, bloody and hurt. "I can't let you do this Broly, you may be stronger than me... you may be stronger than all of us. But, I'll never give up!"

Goku powered up, still in Super Saiyan 2 and ran forward and put his hands back. "Ka...me...ha...me..."

Broly laughed. "Hope will not win you this battle, Kakarrot!" Broly said as he released his attack, smirking.

"HA!" Goku yelled, shooting his Kamehameha.

The savannah rumbled like an earthquake as the sky darkened once more from the sheer energy. The two blasts collided and formed into a gigantic blue-green energy ball hundreds of feet across, which began rapidly descending against Goku.

Broly's hand shaked slightly as he pushed the blast further and further towards Goku.

"I... I can't let you win, Broly." Goku thought to himself, shaking heavily.
"FATHER!" Gohan yelled, descending next to Goku. "I won't let you fight him alone!"

Gohan began turning Super Saiyan 2.

"Gohan! Release your rage! I saw everything. He killed Videl!" Goku yelled to his son as the blast roared and the land nearby began tearing apart. Gohan's fist tightened as he turned Super Saiyan 2.

"Ka...me...ha...me...HA!!!" Gohan yelled, charging his Kamehameha for several seconds.

"Heh!" Broly said, his arm shaking a bit harder, however, still easily in control. The blast still descended upon Gohan and Goku.

"Ugh! If only we weren't injured!" Gohan yelled. "Dammit!"

"I doubt it would matter anyway, Gohan... He's not even taking this seriously!" Goku said smirking.

Goten stood up, extremely hurt. "I... I've got to..."

"N-No... Goten... you're next to nothing to Broly. You'll only create more pain for Goku..." Piccolo said, badly wounded.

Vegeta stood up wearily. "I'm not... about to let Kakarrot and his brat show me up!" Vegeta powered up to Super Saiyan 2 and flew into the savannah.

"D-Dad..." Trunks thought, looking up.

Vegeta landed in between Goku and Gohan.

"V-Vegeta!" Goku said surprised.

"Get that look off your face! I don't go down that easily, you of all people should know that!" Vegeta said, charging his Galick Gun.

Vegeta shot his blast as it merged with the Kamehameha's and slammed into the chi meteor.

Broly's arm shook considerably now, he was sweating heavily, however, still in control of the situation.

"GOHAN! Release all of your energy! Vegeta, he'll kill everything you've worked for here if you don't protect them!" Goku said, infuriating Vegeta. The blast stalled slightly and Broly lifted his eyes slightly as it began gently pushing towards him.

Broly laughed as he put his other arm up and shot another chi ball into the bomb and it pushed towards them once more.

"D-Dammit... Well, guys... its been fun... Gohan, I love you, son... Vegeta, I love you too." Goku said, laughing as he said the last part.

"Oh shut the hell up! I'm going to see you in five minutes when we're all dead!" Vegeta yelled at Goku.

"Why do they still fight, knowing it's useless!?" Broly thought to himself.
"D-Dad!" Goten said, stumbling behind Goku, Gohan and Vegeta. He tried powering up to Super Saiyan, but, exhausted himself in the process and fell over, wheezing.

"G-G-Goten..." Trunks said, barely lifting his upper body up by one arm, shaking. The blackened skies roared as the clouds shifted rapidly in the sky, lightning crashing down around them. The green aura moved closer.
The chi meteor moved even closer, slamming against the ground, cracking the savannah and causing an eruption of chi to burst forth.

"This is the end, Kakarrot! Strength is everything! My power overwhelms yours!" Broly yelled as he put his arm out and began charging the last chi ball to put into the attack.

Broly laughs maniacally as the chi ball condenses in his hand.
"K-Kakarrot! If you have any tricks up your sleeve, now is the time to do it!" Vegeta yelled to him.

"I-I'm fresh out, for once!" Goku yelled.

Broly laughed even louder as he shot the chi ball, it hurled towards the chi meteor. Gohan closed his eyes.

"V-Videl... I'll see you soon." Gohan thought to himself.

"I-I-I c-can't believe... we're gonna lose." Trunks thought to himself. Goten laid on the ground completely unconscious.

Vegeta closed his eyes and yelled, putting everything he had into his attack, even knowing it would be in vain.

Just as the chi ball was about to hit the chi meteor, a voice cried out.

"NEO KI-KO-HO!"

A large beam of energy slammed into the chi ball and the two attacks shuddered, stalling mid air. Ultimately, the chi ball was directed off course into a mountain where it instead caused a vicious explosion.

"T-Tenshinhan!" Goku said, looking up at Tenshinhan dressed in his mountain clothing.

"I don't know what's going on here, Goku, but, we're not going to let the Earth go down without a fight!" Tenshinhan said.

"More of you have come to die!? Why do you continue to fight your own demise!?" Broly yelled as he pointed his hand towards Tenshinhan, charging a chi ball and firing it. It hit him directly and blasted him across the savannah and into a cliff, nearly killing him.

"T-Tenshinhan!" Goku yelled as he powered up and pushed forward, the energy meteor pushing back towards Broly.

Broly roared and charged another chi ball, when suddenly he was grabbed from behind and pulled backwards.

"What?!" Broly yelled as Piccolo roared, pulling Broly back and making him lose his balance.

"NOW!!!" Goku screamed as Gohan's eyes went blank and he screamed, snapping and releasing a lot of energy. Vegeta roared and emptied every last bit of energy he had left into the blast and Goku did as well.

Broly clotheslined Piccolo off of the plateau, knocking him unconscious as he slammed into the ground. Broly looked over and his energy meteor began to shatter.

"Wh-what?!" Broly yelled as he put both of his hands forward and shot a large ray of energy at the approaching blast. Broly's blast slammed viciously into the triple-energy wave, causing it to slow down a bit.

"AAAAAARGH!" Goku yelled, powering up as it pushed towards Broly. Broly sweated profusely as the blast came further and further towards him. Broly, realizing the danger, launched the rest of the energy ray and threw his arms up across his shoulders in a defensive stance as his energy shield began to form.

"Dammit! A barrier!" Vegeta yelled as the blast slammed into Broly's barrier. The plateau Broly was standing on corroded and slammed into the ground, burying Piccolo. The skies churned lightning as the purple/blue energy of the wave illuminated the savannah.

"P-PUSH!" Goku yelled.

"Father! If we launch him into the sun, maybe we can finish this!" Gohan yelled as Goku nodded. "HAAAA!!!"

"RAAAAAAUGH!" Broly screamed as he was shot off the planet and towards the sun, energy barrier fully fueled and still intact.

"Th-they're doing it!" Trunks said, leaning up slightly, coughing heavily.
Broly turned his head and saw the sun approaching, his eyes widened as his barrier roared and collided with the sun. He began yelling in anger and the blast roared around him, however, his barrier would not shatter.

"D-Dammit Kakarrot, it's not working! His chi isn't going down at all. His barrier won't break!" Vegeta said. "I'm... losing consciousness...!"

"H-HOLD ON! JUST HOLD ON!!" Goku said screaming, his entire body shaking as his energy was drained.

"Why... do they... fight like this!? Their strength... where is it... coming from...?!" Broly thought as the fiery sun began heating up his energy barrier slightly. "W-wait..." Broly began losing consciousness slightly.
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"Light and dark... one is the absence of another. Weak and strong... one is the result of the other...?"

"Love and hate... a constant battle."

"Could they truly be powerful, simply because of "love?"

"D-Dad! The flowers are wilting! Why won't they grow?" A very young Broly said to Paragus, holding a small bundle of dying flowers.

"Flowers need light, son. All plants need light to live and prosper." Paragus said with a small smile.

"B-But why?" Broly asked Paragus innocently.

"All things need to be cared for to grow strong and powerful, Broly. The light is what keeps the flowers alive." Paragus said as he knelt and grabbed the flowers and held them up to the light.

"Can they truly gain their power from friendship...?! Ridiculous!"

"Kill them! Kill them all! Vanquish the entire plant, Broly! Reduce them to a sea of ash and blood!" Paragus cried out as a mind controlled Super Saiyan Broly destroyed a small planet. An alien father stood in front of his family as they sobbed.

"Don't you dare hurt them!" The father yelled at Broly. Broly stood quietly, angered at the crying.

"Broly, kill them!" Paragus screamed. Broly watched the father stand in front of his family as he gritted his teeth, picturing his own father. His eyes filled with rage and tears as he threw a large ball of energy, killing them all.

In the blackness of Broly's mind, Goku appears in front of Broly, both standing several feet apart, both in base form.

"Power doesn't come from hate or rage, Broly. It comes from love, from friendship. Bravery to stand up to the darkness and evil in this world."
Broly looked down in the inky blackness and saw a dead flower, once again, looking at it solemnly, yet harshly. Goku walked over and took it from him as it returned to life.

"Everybody hates you Broly, you are a freak. I'm the only one who knows your true power, and values it!"

Goku faded from his mind as Broly looked down upon the dead flower and remembered all the innocents he had slaughtered, even killing his own father, as demented as he was, out of insanity.

Broly looked down, shaking, in his mind alone.
"There's nothing for me... I am a freak." Broly said to himself, grinding his teeth.

Suddenly, out of the darkness of his mind, Rex runs forth. Broly's eyes perk up as Rex leaps into his arms. Rex smiles, looking up at him as Broly looks down and smiles at him with tears in his eyes.

"You were wrong, father."

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Broly's eyes flashed open again, as the ki barrier continued being pushed in the sun, the whole vision occurring in only a few seconds. Broly reverted to base form suddenly as the chi barrier dramatically lost strength.

"Wh-what!?" Gohan said. "H-He just lost a ton of strength!"

Broly became drained of energy and his shield came down. The blast slammed him into the sun. The blast exploded as Broly seemingly floated through the burning star.

"As the darkness fades to light, the brighest star in the sky burns the sins away."

Broly smiled slightly as he accepted his fate. "How sickeningly poetic."
His chest bursted open suddenly as he outstretched his arms, blood flowing out of his chest. He flew back, as the blast surged and he disintegrated in the burning sun, the blast blowing through the other side, with only traces of energy remaining.
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"W-what...?!" Vegeta muttered, surprised and confused as he fell on his knee, thinking deeply about it for a moment. "Dammit Kakarrot, you messed with his head... t-too." Vegeta said, falling down unconscious.

Goku's spirit faded away slowly as he smiled, knowing what just transpired.

Gohan panted, exhausted. "Thank you father." He said quietly as he looked over to where Goku had stood. He closed his eyes, ready to pass out, however, remembering Piccolo, ran over to the rubble near the plateau, pulling him out.

"P-Piccolo! Are you alright?" Gohan said, lifting him up.

Piccolo coughed up some blood and opened his eyes. "Y-Yeah... You killed Broly..." Piccolo said calmly.

"Yeah! It was amazing! I don't know how, he shoulda survived that! It's a miracle." Gohan said proudly

Piccolo smirked. "It was no miracle... even the most twisted of individuals can change their philosophies on life from just a single experience. Goku sort of has that ability... I would know. Hah." Piccolo thought to himself.
Piccolo lost consciousness again, falling against the ground.

"P-Piccolo!" Gohan said as he set him down. "W-Well... I guess I'd better get everybody up and go to Dende..." Gohan thought, he took two steps towards Vegeta when suddenly he began to get dizzy. "Oh man..." Gohan thought as he did a faceplant on the ground, knocked out.
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Four days later at the Lookout, Gohan stood with Tenshinhan talking to Dende.

"So... that's how we beat Broly... but, Videl died..." Gohan said, quietly.
"I know. We can resurrect her in six months, do not worry." Dende said smiling.

"Six months? Didn't you use both wishes to bring Goku back?" Tenshinhan said, surprised.

"Well, the Dragon only used one, however, it left before the second was granted, probably because of the fight." Dende said.

"I see..." Tenshinhan replied, the wind brushed past them. "Well, take care... I wish you the best Gohan." Tenshinhan smiled, saluted Gohan and flew off of the Lookout, the sun beating down warmly on Gohan as he descended, he looked up at the sun and softly smiled.

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Okay, I didn't really like the way I ended it, it was decent though. I intend to do a few alternative endings, however, I felt this fit. I tried not to make Broly seem too wimpy or girly, but, rather make a realization, having an epiphany if you will... I really liked how it turned out in general, though, but, this is all just a rough copy. I will be heavily editing it in my spare time. :)

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Man, that was one sick ending, and Goku wasn't an overpowered Toei-bot! Points for that! When Ten came in I was honestly expecting Krillin, Yamcha and Roshi to show up as well, strangely. I'm glad at least Ten got some time though.

I like this Broly more than the one from Toei's movies actually. This last part was gold. His realization was bittersweet. I really enjoyed it. Good job with this one, dude.
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Thats pretty awesome Neci.
I didnt read everything there lol but all the good bits.
I think its good but like you said the ending is lacking.
And even though Videl can be revived its still very said that she died.... I would have liked it if she was still alive but extremely injured and just barely hanging on.

Overall Nice story. I wanna see your alternate endings.
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It takes a mere second for treasure to turn to trash.

Yeah, I was thinking about keeping her alive and maybe killing one of the kids off.

I just don't like how everyone survives. Haha. I was gonna throw Kuririn and maybe Yamcha in there with Tenshinhan, but, I realized that would be a bit odd, considering at this point, Tenshinhan had departed ways with the other Z-Fighters and basically said he doubts he'd ever see them again.

So, I would just think it odd for him to get a hold of some other Z-Fighters and bring 'em, but, I definitely had planned on it, then changed my mind at the last minute.

This weekend I'm going to make a couple of alternative endings. I don't think this one is that bad, I just think it's missing something. I was going to do a spin-off of the genki dama, but, that's overrated at this point, hence Vegeta's line:

"We'll get Kakarrot to make the genki dama! It works every time!" Vegeta said sarcastically. "Oh, wait!"

Hahaha.
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I love the Broly u used, As said.. just a sick person.. he just wanted to protect the dearest in his life... "Power" :9.
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Just finished reading it all it was pretty good. I liked the idea that you did actually kill of Videl so that people don't always survive everything even though she would be brought back to life. It was a pretty intense fight and it's also a good thing you didn't bring in every Z warrior otherwise it would just get typical. Overall a good story

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I added something to the end of Broly's dream sequence when he has his "epiphany", when he is being blasted into the sun, to sort of top it off. I think that adds a lot to the "what is missing" factor. Check it out!
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Wow, now it really is sad.
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Mission accomplished. :D
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Sep 14 2010, 09:54 PM
Wow, now it really is sad.
Do you think it helped though? I was tryin. To make him turn out to be more of an anti-hero as it progressed rather than a simple villain.

I do intend to make at least 2 if not more endings, though.
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Part III: Birth of Insanity

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"Still laughing, Vegeta?" Broly said as he disappeared and re-appeared in front of Vegeta and grabbed him by his throat, lifting him up. "I don't think so." Broly said, laughing insanely as he began crushing Vegeta's throat.

"N-NO!" Gohan screamed as he too transformed to Super Saiyan 2 and kicked Broly viciously in the back, which had no effect. Broly dropped Vegeta and swiped him with his arm mid air and sent him flying through one side of a hill and out the other. Broly roared and slammed into Gohan.

Gohan flew several yards before grabbing the ground with his hand, scraping his hand up, but, regaining his balance. Gohan leaped and punched Broly straight in the face, which had no effect.

Broly smiled and punched Gohan mercilessly in the stomach. Gohan coughed blood up on Broly's arm. Broly dragged his fist upwards and uppercutted Gohan. Broly then grabbed his face as Gohan was flying upwards (from being uppercutted) and slammed him into a rock.

Broly then charged a chi blast with the hand holding Gohan's head into the rock and blasted Gohan down.

Vegeta roared and powered up to full power and blasted towards Broly and kicked him in the chest, which made Broly lose his balance and fall back a few feet. Vegeta reappeared on the other side of him, swiping him at his neck. Broly grabbed Vegeta's leg and slammed him into the ground.

Broly then backflipped while still holding onto Vegeta's leg and slammed Vegeta onto the ground and landed on him. Vegeta screamed in pain.
"Still got some fight left in you?" Broly said smirking as he stepped off of Vegeta.

"Trunks... I can barely feel your chi." Vegeta thought, panting as he looked up at Broly, who was merely smirking maniacally and looking down at him. Vegeta stood back up and roared, flying into the air.

"Would the Legendary Super Saiyan DARE take this head on?! Bwahaha!" Vegeta said, powering up once more. Vegeta outstretched his arms and two large chi bombs appeared in both of them.

Broly chuckled. "Prepare to face your fears... AND DIE!" Broly yelled as he formed an energy shield.
"FINAL FLASH!" Vegeta said, slamming his hands together and a giant ray of pure energy shot toward Broly.
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"I had suspected as much... the Earth will be destroyed." Piccolo thought, standing at the edge of Kami's lookout. He threw his weighted clothing down.

"Dende, I must go. The Earth is in danger." Piccolo said nodding to Dende and blasting off of Kami's Lookout.

Dende stood quietly and felt Broly's presence. "It is in danger... I wish I could do something to help. This power is unlike one I've ever felt before."
Dende walked over to the edge of the lookout and stood quietly.
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"I... I gotta... the Dragonballs..." Goten said to himself as he crawled through the partially destroyed village, heading to the guest home they stayed in with the four star ball clutched in his hand.
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Broly flew at Vegeta as an energy shield formed around him. Vegeta roared as the blast thickened. Broly was struggling a bit, but, pushing through Vegeta's attack.

"N-No!" Vegeta yelled as Broly punched him in the stomach. Vegeta coughed up blood and leaned forward a bit.

"Ugh... I underestimated him... He's too powerful." Vegeta said looking up at Broly, who was chuckling.

"Had enough yet?" Broly said. "I killed your son and now I will kill you. Everything that your weak mind has found solace in at this planet will be destroyed. And you will be POWERLESS to STOP ME!" Broly said laughing.

"T-Trunks... I... Ugh..." Vegeta said. Broly dropped his head down and kneed him in the face then elbowed him downward into the ground.

Vegeta laid in the rubble, still in Super Saiyan 2. Gohan stood up, still in Super Saiyan 2 as well.

"Vegeta... I'm sorry." Gohan said as he looked over at Vegeta. Vegeta had tears in his eyes as he roared angrily.

"Heh." Broly grunted.

"I HATE IT! I'm always second to Kakarrot... and now, I can't even defend my family... and... YOU KILLED MY SON!" Vegeta said roaring as he flew at Broly violently. Broly grabbed Vegeta by his arm and twisted it. He yelled in pain. Just as Broly was going to slam him onto his knee, he was blasted in the back by Gohan, dropping Vegeta.

Vegeta swung his leg around and kicked Broly in the neck, who grunted in pain.

Broly swiped at Vegeta, who dodged and sent a large blast into Broly's chest, which exploded outwards, sending Vegeta down into the field again. He glided across the ground and gently landed. He began to wildly fire chi blasts into the smoke.

"Goten... KA... ME... HA... ME... HA!!!" Gohan screamed, firing a full power Kamehameha into the smoke as it blasted Broly straight into the ground and exploded. The entire valley cracked and a huge amount of energy erupted from underneath, the ground cracking, seeping through.

Gohan's inner rage kicked in as Vegeta looked on in shock, flying next to Gohan and powering up, charging two huge amounts of chi in each hand. He clapped them together and shot a huge beam down into the same hole that Gohan blasted Broly into. It exploded and the ground completely shot into the air, cracking apart and being destroyed completely.

Shrapnel from trees and a cold roar erupted as a lot of green energy came out of the ground. Vegeta screamed violently as he put everything he had into the blast, merging his into Gohan's. Gohan powered up and finished his blast as well.

"V-Vegeta! We'll destroy the Earth if we put anymore power into this!" Gohan said powering down.

"You damn fool! HE KILLED TRUNKS!" Vegeta yelled as he roared.
Gohan grabbed Vegeta's hands and stopped him from continuing to fire the blast. Vegeta slugged him in the stomach.

"You... little *****!" Vegeta said.

"Vegeta... I'm sorry. There is no hope for any of us if you destroy the Earth." Gohan said to him, who nodded his head slightly and powered down. They both landed near the village, overlooking the utterly massacred valley, with tiny amounts of cracked land left and a huge black pit going to nothingness below.

Gohan panted as Vegeta stood up and looked around the village. He saw Trunks laying amongst some rubble and walked over to him and picked him up.

Vegeta's eyes opened slightly. "He's still alive!"

"W-wow... they... they did it! I guess we don't need Shenron..." Goten thought as he painfully pulled himself back over. "That big Broly must be super tough... he wasn't even going all out at us in his Super Saiyan form... I definitely wouldn't have wanted to be Gohan a few minutes ago!"

"I... I don't sense Broly. Did we do it?" Gohan thought as a large hand clasped his shoulder.

Gohan turned around, shocked. However, he was greeted with a smile.
It was Piccolo.

"P-Piccolo! You came!" Gohan said. Piccolo smiled.

"Of course I came, Gohan... I can't just sit and watch on the lookout while Broly is on Earth." Piccolo said. "Here... you might need one of these."
Piccolo gave Gohan a senzu.

"W-Wow! Yeah... I'm really worn out. I put everything I had into that one blast." Gohan said eating the senzu, his gi torn up at the ankles and only one shoulder part remaining.

Vegeta ran over to Piccolo.

"Give him a senzu, NOW!" Vegeta said demandingly. Piccolo nodded and gave Trunks a senzu.

"Eat it, Trunks! It'll heal you!" Vegeta said as Trunks slowly chewed the senzu. Slowly his eyes opened. "D-Dad...?"

Vegeta looked down at Trunks for a quick moment and smiled, but, suddenly realized his act of compassion and dropped Trunks on his head.
"Ow!" Trunks said, slowly standing up. "I'm really stiff... where's that Broly guy?"

"Dead. Vegeta and Gohan finished him off." Piccolo said. "Or did they...?"
"Or did they...? What are you getting at!?" Vegeta said as he took a senzu from Piccolo for himself.

Gohan, meanwhile, gave Goten a senzu. "I can't even sense Videl's chi... that bastard... she's dead..."

"I'm saying Broly is a tough opponent. You've noticed how his chi just builds back up no matter what you do to him. Not even Goku could kill him seven years ago." Piccolo said.

"Peh! "Goku" was too weak! Just like with Freeza! He didn't have the guts to finish him off, but, when his son over there pops a blood vessel and rips loose and I show the true power of a Saiyan prince, there is no way that brute could survive!" Vegeta said cockily.
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Broly laid in base form underground, trapped under a pile of rocks. Very hurt, but, not mortally wounded. He went into a semi-coma like state again. His mind began to go into the past.

"Broly... my son, you only exist for one purpose. To serve me." Paragus said to a recently mind controlled Broly. "I love you son, the only person who ever has. Everybody hates you Broly, you are a freak. I'm the only one who knows your true power, and values it!" Paragus said smiling.

"Yes... father." Broly said, tightening his fists lightly.

Broly's mind flashed again as he saw himself flying over a city in Restricted Super Saiyan.

"Destroy! Broly, destroy!" Paragus said, laughing, using his mind control device.

Broly grunted and launched the chi blasts down at the city as they exploded violently, roaring outwards and killing all of the inhabitants.
"Bwahahah! Soon, the entire galaxy will be destroyed!" Paragus said, clapping Broly on the shoulder. A small child ran out of the rubble, crying loudly.

Broly pictured Goku crying in his crib, however, he was not angered by it, rather saddened.

Paragus seemed confused as Broly landed in front of the child. "I'm sorry." Was all he said to the child, in his calm, restricted demeanor.

"My parents are dead..." The alien child said crying. Broly winced at this painfully as Paragus used the mind control device and yelled "Kill it!". Broly tried to fight it, but, the child cried even louder, scarring Broly as he punched through its stomach. It looked up at him, crying a little more and died. Broly turned and roared, running at Paragus.

"What?!" Paragus said as he narrowly dodged Broly's strike. Paragus desperately used his mind control device to stop Broly, who roared in anger. Tears rolled down his face and he began to sweat heavily as he powered down to base form and fell on his knees.

"How is he capable of such compassion?! Is he really kind hearted or is he just sickened to be doing my deed? Bah... Saiyan of Legend..." Paragus thought as Broly panted heavily on his knees.

Broly's mind flashed again, except to an earlier memory of himself.
Broly was quietly sitting on a ruined planet, which Paragus had cleared out himself for Broly and him to live at for some time. Broly sat on the ground and stared at the sky.

"Broly, what are you doing?" Paragus said sternly.

"What do you care? I'm just sitting here... did you really have to kill all of them?" Broly said.

"Broly! You are a Saiyan! A legendary warrior with great capabilities! Such pacifism is ridiculous!" Paragus said and continued, "Listen, I know you haven't had the Saiyan mission in your head, but, you have Saiyan blood."
Broly sat quietly as Paragus thought to himself, "Bah... The damn boy is soft. It's my fault, he just sits around quietly, like he's waiting for something. I need to unlock his true abilities!"

Broly's memories flashed again.

"Look, dad! I made a friend! I'm gonna name him Rex." Broly smiled calmly as he held a small dog-like creature in his hand, as a small boy of around five or six.

Paragus growled angrily at Broly.

Broly stirred in his underground coma-like state.

"Dad! Have you seen Rex?" A slightly older Broly said to Paragus. Paragus smirked as he pointed towards a small city they were flying over on a nearby planet to the one they were staying in. Broly nodded his head and blasted off towards it, flying through outer space for just a moment, but, reaching the planet.

Broly landed on the planet and came to the city. He landed in it, it seemed somewhat abandoned. He looked around the city-streets of the ruined place. It began to storm as huge winds kicked up around him in the planet. The skies began to churn a fiery red fury as a thunderous boom roared overhead. Broly entered the main plaza of the city and saw Rex, his pet, laying bleeding and panting in the center of the city.

"R-Rex... REX!" Broly said shaking his dog angrily. He stood up, his fist tightened. Suddenly, the creatures that had destroyed this great city leaped out of the rubble. They were twice Broly's size and very powerful, resembling large spider/humanoid creatures. They swiped at Broly. Broly screamed as his arm got slashed open and he was knocked next to his dog.

"I-I'm sorry, Rex." Broly said coughing up blood as he laid in the rubble next to him. Paragus floated overhead, chuckling. The large creatures surrounded them as Broly stood up, powering up and charging at them. He tried to punch one, but, it dodged and stabbed him in the forearm.

Another one stabbed him in the leg. He coughed up blood. He looked back at Rex, who whimpered and tried standing up.

"What?! I mangled that dog!" Paragus said to himself. "How is it still standing?"

Rex dived at the spider creature on Broly, but, it slashed Rex, killing him instantly.

"R-REX!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!" Broly said screaming, tears flowing from his eyes as he turned Super Saiyan for the first time. He roared as his energy exploded outwards, instantly killing the spiders that were stabbing him. He stood, bloodied and angry as he mercilessly began killing each of the spiders.

"What is this... transformation? Could he be... I knew it...!" Paragus said, shaking slightly. "Together! We will destroy the cosmos!"

Broly powered down to base as each of the spiders were dead, however, he was drained and was bleeding heavily. He fell down in the water as the skies began pouring acidic rain. Paragus swept down and grabbed Broly in a rush and brought him back to the planet they were staying on.

Paragus sat next to Broly in a ruined-like cottage on their planet and mended his wounds. Broly regained consciousness and stared at his father.
"...Why did everyone die but us... why did Rex die?" Broly asked, coughing.
Paragus was taken aback slightly and looked at Broly. "Things die, Broly. Just when you rely on something the most, it disappears. The only true thing in this world is power."

Broly sat up slightly, in pain as he looked up at the sky through one of the holes in the cottage. He lost consciousness again and hit his head hard against the stone table.

Paragus' words echoed with him, "The only true thing in this world is power."
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"D-Dad!" Trunks said to Vegeta, "Is Broly gonna come back?"

Vegeta grunted. "Dammit, Trunks. I'm trying to find his energy. How am I supposed to do that with you bothering me!?"

Piccolo, in a meditative, cross-legged stance sat up. "I think he's really gone. Perhaps we overestimated his power."

"I'm not so sure..." Gohan said. "Maybe we should take a look down in that crater, just in case."
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"This is wonderful!" Paragus thought to himself as Broly violently destroyed cities out of sheer anger, in Super Saiyan.

"Yes, Broly! Destroy, maim and kill!" Paragus said laughing as Broly laughed insanely, destroying cities, now significantly older, but, not yet mind controlled.

"Good. At this rate... We'll be able to settle Saiyan dominance once more with Broly, my superweapon!" Paragus thought, while laughing. Paragus suddenly seemed shocked as Broly charged a huge energy attack. "N-No! Broly! You'll destroy the planet! Enough!" Paragus said, trying to stop Broly. Broly stood still as Paragus grabbed his arms.

"You said... the only thing that matters... is POWER! I AM GOING TO SHOW YOU MY POWER!" Broly said, elbowing Paragus violently in the ribs as he lost his breath and fell back, barely conscious as Broly finished charging the energy bomb. Paragus flew down to his Saiyan pod and got into it, panting heavily with a little blood coming out of his mouth. Broly threw the energy bomb.

"M-Must... set coordinates." Paragus said, vision blurring. He quickly set the coordinates for the planet they lived on and launched the pod. He barely made it off the planet as it became a green blur and radically exploded. A shower of pure energy rained out into space, as Broly blasted off at full speed out of the explosion, past Paragus' pod and towards the planet.

"B-Broly... you've become a monster... ugh. I'd be tempted to think you would die out in space here without oxygen... but, somehow you seem to hold it just long enough to survive every time..." Paragus thought to himself. "I'm starting to think... I've made a bad decision..." He thought as he passed out.

As Broly flew through space, he thought to himself, remembering Goku in his crib and sighed out of anger and remembered everything crying as he destroyed them. "Such weakness... power is all that exists, without it, you are infinitely nothing."
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This part does seem to contradict itself in a few spots, such as Broly believing power is everything, however, later on when being mind controlled, is sympathetic to the weak. However, ye shall wait for the next part. :)
You had me, but when you added the dog, you lost me fast. Broly.....with a dog...named Rex... :x
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